From the very start of the rehearsal process we loved our paper marketing manager, Hope’s script that she wrote for another module. Originally a feminist piece, myself and Ollie took this script and edited it to make it fit more with Shoes to Fill. It went through many edits from the original script, which I have attached below. The second version was similar to the original but edited by myself to utilise more characters and fairly include one of each gender to have each personality instead of seeming to conform to the stereotype of an overly-flirty girl or boy. For the read-through of our original script, the tinder scene was heavily added to so that it matched the family-based running storyline that I have previously explained about. However, this did not work and so it was decided we should return to the second draft but with the clever decision by Ollie to add more emojis into the scene for comedic effect. The fourth attachment is what was shown in our performance.
Tinder Scene FINAL (taken to read-through)
Final tinder scene in performance
Hannah.