Blog 7

Early on in the process, we all agreed that a particular point of interest was verbatim, a fascinating ‘form of documentary theatre which is based on the spoken words of real people’ (Drama Online, 2015). We wanted to interview people with a range of ages, taking into consideration people from different eras and cultures and how their views on growing up and adulthood varied. This then later developed into collecting stories finding stories from people which all fit into our five sections or chapters of Shoes to Fill. These five chapters were the stereotypical milestones in one’s life, the parts of life that a person should “usually” conform to: growing up, going to university or finding a job, finding “the one”, becoming a parent and growing old.

We interviewed family and friends and then selected stories that were relevant to this performance structure and they were placed into the appropriate chapters:  a story from an older lady speaking about her desire to be a nurse from a young age and a recorded interview from a young man who works with his father both fitted nicely into the chapter about whether to choose to go to university or get a job. In the finding “the one” section, we selected an interview from a Sikh woman who was able to escape the threat of a forced marriage and the obstacles she overcame and another from a senior citizen remembering how she met her late husband and that they remained together even though they were followers of conflicting religions. The following fit into the becoming a parent section: a story from a Bosnian man who unexpectedly became a father and was later able to get his daughter out of a war-torn country and a selection about the trials and joys of becoming a parent and lastly one about a man who became part of an already formed family with three grown up children and his journey to being accepted as one of them.

I left a couple of the verbatim pieces alone such as the nurse and the forced marriage ones as they were taken straight from recorded interviews and were not sent to us in written form. Some of the others had grammatical issues that in places did not work so I edited them slightly, removing parts that did not make sense – see the two attached documents which clearly show the original paragraphs and the final edited ones that featured in our piece. I also chose to mostly leave the Bosnia scene as it was decided that it would help create a sense of character, allowing a natural accent to come through the language and not a potentially stereotypical or offensive one created by the actors.

 

Nurse Verbatim – length only edited

 

Forced Marriage Verbatim – barely edited

 

Religion Original Verbatim

Religion Verbatim – edited

 

Original Verbatim – Parenthood

Parenthood Verbatim Edited (in final)

 

Bosnia Verbatim – barely edited

 

Original Step-Parent Verbatim

Step-Parent Verbatim -edited

 

Hannah.

 

*The above attachments were added at a later date now that they are complete as well as the details regarding them in the above blog – this date shown was when they were were decided upon.*

 

Works Cited

Drama Online (2015) Verbatim theatre. [online] UK: Bloomsbury. Available from http://www.dramaonlinelibrary.com/genres/verbatim-theatre-iid-2551 [Accessed  19 April 2015].

Oliver Parkes Blog Post 3

Upon some deliberation with how the script and the performance is going, we have decided that it would be better for me to be first marked on performing, and second marked on writing, due to the ratio of boys to girls in the group and how the script is panning out. I will still have an effect on the script, but to a lesser extent than before.

 

Our director approached me about the lack of comedy in what we have so far in our script, and with an idea of how to change that. The idea was that we have an “expectation” of what will happen, things like Santa at first being a magical present giver, and then finding out that actually he’s made up. As our piece is now focusing more on different “sections” of life – Growing Up, University/Job, Finding the One, Have A Family, and Retire – we decided that it would be best to have them particular to each section. For example, in the “Have a Family” section, there was:

 

‘Expectation: When I’m a parent, I’ll still have time to have a social life!

Reality: I have more contact with the Teletubbies than I do real human beings.’

 

We decided that there would be five of these per section, as a sort of through-line going throughout the entirety of the piece to contrast the much more serious verbatim stories that we had collected. I have attached them to this post.

 

Expectation-VS-Reality-FINAL

EDIT: Later was added the final expectation/reality starting ‘I’m going to live to be 100!’ but I have added it here for convenience.

 

Ollie

Blog 6

From the very start of the rehearsal process we loved our paper marketing manager, Hope’s script that she wrote for another module. Originally a feminist piece, myself and Ollie took this script and edited it to make it fit more with Shoes to Fill. It went through many edits from the original script, which I have attached below. The second version was similar to the original but edited by myself to utilise more characters and fairly include one of each gender to have each personality instead of seeming to conform to the stereotype of an overly-flirty girl or boy. For the read-through of our original script, the tinder scene was heavily added to so that it matched the family-based running storyline that I have previously explained about. However, this did not work and so it was decided we should return to the second draft but with the clever decision by Ollie to add more emojis into the scene for comedic effect. The fourth attachment is what was shown in our performance.

Tinder scenes ORIGINAL

Tinder scene EDITED

Tinder Scene FINAL (taken to read-through)

Final tinder scene in performance

 

Hannah.

Collaborating

Today’s session it was our first time back together after the Easter break and now a script was delivered to the cast to be practiced in workshops. For the first part of the workshop we read through the script and discussed the potential to the scenes. It is always important to try out scenes and characters before they are disregarded.

Now everyone had worked with the script as producer I made the decision to call a meeting for the company to discuss the themes of the script, and what we liked about it and what could potentially be cut. I put the manifesto up on the board to ensure our concept fitted to the script. This session was important as today the decision has been made to cut parts of the script to put in potential verbatim stories that we want to incorporate into our production.

Oliver Parkes Blog Post 2

One of the first things we had looked at, back when we were thinking of looking at different topics instead of growing up, was a scene written by Hope about the internet dating service Tinder. She had used it originally to demonstrate, using comedy, stereotypes of men and women dating, and turning the ideas on their heads. Basically, instead of the stereotypical man trying to get sex from a woman looking for love, the man was the lovesick one and the woman was the one wanting just a sexual fling. We decided that this could still be used once we decided on our final idea of growing up, as dating is a huge part of many people’s lives. Hannah and I edited the scene so that it made more sense – we changed the set up of it so that both genders were on both sides, and Hannah made the dialogue flow between the two pairs.

Tamsyn then approached me and asked for more comedy in the scene. I came up with the idea that, as the scene already mentioned a few staple “emojis”, using more could really bring comedic value to the scene. So I set about adding these to the scene, usually midsentence, as the juxtaposition of real dialogue and modern emojis spoken out loud unexpectedly creates humour, especially as things like “peeling banana emoji” would be said dead-pan. I am looking forward to seeing how this scene works with our actors!

Ollie

Tinder scenes ORIGINAL

Tinder Scene FINAL

Tinder scene EDITED

Final tinder scene in performance